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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do u agree or disagree with this statement

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Many people believe that living in a country where we have to speak
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foreign
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language
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 can cause serious social
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 as well as practical
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 while some believe that
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 gets adapted to it and helps him to improve his knowledge of the
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. There can be plenty of social
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 as feeling isolated because
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 is not able to talk to others,
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 may lead to stress. People might
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 get the feeling that they will be judged by the natives and not accepted by them, that they will face rejection from them.
One
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 can
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 get frustrated over time and somewhere along the line they will need to
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 anger but will not be able to because they can not communicate with anyone, they can not share their feelings openly. Social
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 are not the only ones, practical
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 are
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 to understand a
foregin
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foreign
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 might lead them to not able to understand directions, instructions or warning signs, and here it becomes complicated.
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 can not even ask what it means or understand if someone is trying to warn them. He might
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 not be able to order food that he wants and end up getting and eating food
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 is not of his taste.
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, Mr Bean is perfect to understand
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, in his movie about his holiday trip, he was not able to ask for directions to the beach as he
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 not speak the
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 of the country he is in and gets caught up in serious trouble. To conclude, I firmly believe that
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 should learn basics if can not master the
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foreign
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 that he or she is going to use when
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 to abroad as it can be the cause for some serious issues.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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