You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic Television injects violence in children, and programs with violent scenes should be banned. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The

majority

of people believes that the

voilent

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violent

content

in

TV

shows is the primary reason for aggression in school children. To some

extent

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,extent

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I believe

such

content

should be banned from a program broadcasted for

young

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a young

the young

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audience. In the following, paragraph I will explain the reason for my notion.

Firstly

,

TV

shows with a

brutual

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brutal

content

should be banned for the youth, as they increase the aggressiveness among the school children.

Secondly

, horror and action movies with

the

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fighting

content

always

provokes

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the young

audiance

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audience

to perform the stunt.

For instance

, due to the Wrestling World Cup youngsters has viewed the action shows,

hence

they ended up imitating the same in the residential society;

therefore

,the

majority

of them suffered

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fractures on their hands.

On the other hand

, the same

tv

shows are viewed by a

majority

of

kids

but all are not aggressive in nature;

thus

,

TV

shows are not the major factor of violence among the

kids

.

In addition

, children with

the

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positive attitude are not impacted

with

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the

surrounding

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they understand the impact of

content

in shows and don't try to copy the action scenes.

Thirdly

, youth were violent even before the

TV

was invented. According to the studies, one of the major

source

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sources

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of violence is illiteracy, as the

majority

of junivile in the US prison are illiterate. In conclusion, it is clear from the above examples that illiteracy is the key factor for

the

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violence among

kids

.

Consequently

, while banning

the

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cruel

content

on a

TV

channel , the government should take initiative to promote education among

kids

.