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More and more people are now moving away from an agricultural background to cities for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solution you can offer?

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Nowadays, most of the
people
 moving towards the city pursuing
for
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better jobs. Though they are
prefering
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preferring
 urban and industrial jobs and giving more weight
in
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this
 sector, it should
also
 need to keep it in concern that agriculture is the essential
fields
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 for providing
food
 supports. In the given essay, I'll debate on the consequences and try to put
a solutions
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a solution
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. To commence with, it is quite visible that many
people
 are moving towards the cities searching for a better job. Industrial jobs
means
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 more income.
As a result
,
people
 will face
the
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 lack of
food
 productions which is
on
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 of the important fields in our economy. It will affect the cost of the
foods
 and
price
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 will turn higher than before.
For instance
, if the
production
 of rice
decline
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, it will create a great impact in countries like Bangladesh because rice is one of the main
foods
. It will affect the
food
 sector and
people
 need to buy
foods
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in
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 extreme
price
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.
On the other hand
, it is possible to overcome
this problems
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 with the proper help of the government and
food
production
 organizations. Farmers are not getting enough wages to support their families. Because
food
 is one of the great
ecomic
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economic
factor
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, we should motivate the farmers for more
food
production
 and provide them
enough
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 supports. Even we can use
the
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modern technology for fulfilling the demand. More
production
 will help farmers to get more wages and other benefits. To conclude, Though industries are playing important roles
but
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we should
also
 improve the agriculture sector because
foods
 are essential for
the
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livings. Everything
need
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 to be in a balance for prospering of a country.
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