some young people say that their mobile phone are the most important think they own. Do you think that the use of mobile phones is good. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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airline

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is the fastest public transportation, the

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emission by air is much larger than by

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. I believe that cancel some not essential flights will have more remarkable impacts than

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restriction

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in

disposing

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global warming. There are several alternative approaches of air transportation that without damaging the connection between two cities but consume less fuel since they running on the floor

instead

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of taking off from the land. From

physical

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prospect, a business

airplane

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aeroplane

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is nearly weight

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is nearly weighted

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40 tons, and launching it from land will generate

numermous

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numerous

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dioxide because we need to

gurantee

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guarantee

having sufficient large acceleration to start the

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.

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, driving a

car

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on the land just need to take limited force even human can push the

car

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by hand. If we reduce the number of flights, the emission of

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dioxide will reduce dramatically thereby preventing

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global warming as

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dioxide in the atmosphere will interfere

the

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heat

speard

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spread

from earth to the universe.

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diminish the

casues

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causes

of global warming, some extreme weather like

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drought

or flood will

be avoid

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.

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,

comapring

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comparing

with

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of

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usage, the negative effect of reducing the number of flights is lesser, especially for some inland cities. Using

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a vehicle

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vehicle

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vehicles

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to travel to another city is popular and people can enjoy the scenery on the road. If cancel some airline, visitor can use alternative approaches like

divring

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diving

driving

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, taking bus or train which will consume less fuel and still can reach the destination. Not only can these options prevent

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fierce

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emission

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emissions

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but remain a strong connection between

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the two

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cities. In conclusion, stoping some unnecessary

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airlines

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instead

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of

restrict

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car

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ownership to protect the environment is considerable.