Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

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claim that some
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should be shared with
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about scientific research,
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and so on. The
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argue that it is essential or decisive so any
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with, some
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consider that
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must be learned by the majority. As a matter of fact, technology and knowledge are making progress step by step, so the majority believe that
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has to be
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about
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, scientific research and
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. Much
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is useful for getting experience, upgrading thinking style, worldwide and
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that some
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is crucial or important and it shouldn'
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be known by everybody. In fact,
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have increased than before time, so all
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learned
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by many countries or
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all countries, probably they will try to improve their guns and it is
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shared
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with countries or
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, because each government had better protect many hazards. Weighing up both sides of the argument, I must admit that much
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is very necessary to be shared freely.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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