Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

The world has been developing for many years and many

employers

need employees. When they accept some people in their companies, they have to ask some

questions

but these topics sometimes can be more

privacy

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private

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. Some citizens think that

this

information may be relevant and beneficial while others think that it is absolutely wrong. In my opinion,

employers

should many

questions

from

job

experiences not personal topics.

To begin

with, according to some

employers

,

worker’s

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a worker’s

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life is significant for them because of

effect

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the effect

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the

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of the

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job

.

For example

, becoming married sometimes can create some problems. If a worker gets married and he discussed with his wife,

this

circumstance bad

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effects

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affects

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effects

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for

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apply

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the

work

as the employee cannot focus on his

job

.

Job

yields can be reduced.

Therefore

, the employer asks specific

questions

so that they can get an employee

accordingly

.

On the other hand

, it's wrong to ask other

questions

besides

work

in a

job

interview because there's no connection between

work

done and hobbies.

For instance

, when an advertising company hires employees, it wants a creative person, not an athlete, so it doesn't ask them about their hobbies. Most employees agree with

this

idea.

That is

why it is not necessary. To sum up,

employers

sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information,

such

as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that

this

information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. From my point of view, they just should ask about the

work

not

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,not

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privacy

questions

.