Every one of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Some
people
think that consuming food
is very dangerous to our health
provided that people
should only eat vegetarian food
.Vegetarian food
or meat
both has their own pros and cons.People
cannot say which one is completely healthy.In this
modernized era , the entire world population often eats junk food
deteriorating health
conditions.Firstly
, eating meat
in today's world is considered far more dangerous than in past decades. This
is because,
a wide range of chemicals are involved in processing Remove the comma
apply
this
meat
which results in damaging its nutritious value and also
increasing its cholesterol intake . Thereby , causing harmful health
problems namely heart cancer, asthma . To illustrate, two people
from the US in the state of Pennsylvania were reported with a disease called " heart cancer " . These cases took a peak in 2019 due to which Pennsylvania Food
authority was banned from importing food
-enriched with harmful chemicals.On the other hand
, some multinational companies intentionally sell spoiled meat
to earn more profit .Thereby, ruining consumer's health
. Meat
mostly causes a harmful serious condition in the overweighted population of the world . Therefore
, Over- weighted people
being physically unfit to get highly affected by meat
causing a high increase in sugar levels.Submitted by irshade11 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite