In recent years, technology developed and relations between
countries
improved
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ever before .So international
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is increased even
countries
making so much beneficial thinks
such
as selling products to outside
countries
people
, etc .
On the other hand
,
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tourism
harm
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nature.
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think
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and nations can fix
this
.
First
foremost, with
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can boost economic activities and create jobs .
As a result
,
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living
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will improve and
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art
such
as art, sculpture, ancient building .
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, takes
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country with ancient arts building but in their country
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allow
tourism
.
Then
time goes some building goes destroyed and stoled and
people
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there ignore their culture because it has no benefits.
On the other hand
, allowing other nations
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their
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buildings art gives them
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to get money for selling or showing them and
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will care about
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items and reproduce or rebuild them.
Secondly
, its undoubtedly other
countries
people
can harm nature and environment but
tourism
gives local more
to learn others or exchange their knowledge.
Therefore
,
people
can get investments from other
countries
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or starting
.
Consequently
locals education level and factors will increase.
For example
, friendly
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introduce
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countries
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visiter and become know each other.
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local wanted to start
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but has money.
his new
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investmentCorrect article usage
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company and he helped
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his business .So
tourism
even can develop
countries
In conclusion, maybe
tourism
brings pollutions and few drawbacks but for
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advantages of
tourism
outweigh the disadvantage and
thus
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is fixable if the
gives messages.