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Outline why you have selected your chosen three university courses, and explain how this relates to your previous academic or professional experience and your plans for the future.

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Regarding
postgraduate
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 study, I am a keen interest in specializing
international
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in international
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business
 management.
This
 is appealing to understand insights
in
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into
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 the fundamentals of
business
 operations across the countries. I
also
 will learn about the international economic environments by studying several
business
 disciplines and examining the latest management research.
Furthermore
, I will keep up with the complex and ever-changing global marketplace. These are really exciting and attractive to me. There are a large
amount
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 of relations regarding my undergraduate courses and the work experiences over the four-year period. As of my graduation in Economics, I obtained a lot of
basis
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 knowledge in the economic environments and perspectives, which had many main subjects supporting directly to my master
study
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such
 as microeconomics, macroeconomics and historical economic thoughts. Following the graduation year, I have visualized my career path in the
business
 role as a product manager.
This
 current position is related to totally operations which begin at importing to the
last
 step
as
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 how to distribute the products to our customers. All of those relatively align with
business
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 management field.
Moreover
, I often currently deal with foreign firms. For
this
 background, I
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therefore
 choose to be
further
 expertise in international
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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