Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.)

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According to one view, collegians have to learn only lessons in

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of science and technology. In

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for the careers which are now available and works.

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educated engineers.

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the other hand, advocates of freedom to choose beloved courses of studies believe that

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far advantages. One of them is that there may generate some problems in the future which need

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outline of just technology or science. To solve them, the youth will be applied who are creative and graduated from particular branches they were enthusiastic to them. A case in point

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of some kinds of psychological patients via painting and playing with

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. From my point of view, while the idea of making scientists and technicians has far positive

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but forcing guys to educate determined lessons is easier said than done. Always successful nation

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plans and university students are not the exception. We require innovative brains to take the lead and surge the future, as well as, demolishing current drawbacks. In conclusion,

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there is an argument between studying specified and likeable courses, to me, the society needs eager public who have knowledge in many cases.(

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