Please explain how you build and maintain relationships in a professional capacity, using clear examples of how you currently do this, and outline how you hope to use these skills in the future.

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The world has gradually changed by human beings over the thousand years. In general, People actually are associated with each
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for a number of reasons including living, business and socialization. In my opinion, having
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relationship is
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great
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in my life and meaningful throughout
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lifetime.
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essay will discuss how
relationships
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are built and maintained with adaptations in the future. There are a number of approaches to build and keep longer
relationships
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.
Firstly
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, being humble is an impressive character. Greetings to make a
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impression should be polite and
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. In Thai culture, I always pay respect to the elders even in my workplace and everyday life,
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keeps smiling at
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sight which is
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a good facial expression.
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, being kind and friendly
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make
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you
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easier
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approach to know others. I will simply start with being a good listener when I talk with someone in order to get their messages as much as possible. Regarding my work, I tried to listen
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customers’
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more than trying to present
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a product
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product
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for sale.
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is to get all of
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and recommend appropriately a solution to them.
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, apart from work, no judgment in some topics
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as religions and politics is another great expression to keep
relationships
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. In my opinion, those are individual thoughts
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are no right and no wrong. Another essential thing that will build and maintain great
relationships
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is being sincere with keeping one’s promise and true action.
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, once I said that I promised to do some tasks by
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, it would be really done as my words. It
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made you more reliable.
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situation, I quoted some pricing to
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the customer
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customer
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for one year period, I
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keep it until
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the expiration
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date.
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should not be changed during the period as of correct work process and keeping
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with my customers.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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