Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Environmental causes various
problems
in the world. Many individuals think that these
issues
should be resolved globally
while
others
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and
argued
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that these
problems
should be solved individually as a country. Both
this
view has its pros and cons.
However
, both these arguments
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be examined
further
before commenting on my own opinion. On the one hand, many people opine that
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in
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problems
due to
some environmental causes should be worked out internationally as it’s
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responsibility of all the nations. They
also
suggest that international agencies should come forward with
the
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larger funds to resolve the tactics of environmental damages. All the countries should donate certain funds to possibly stop certain
problems
such
as deforestation, human health
issues
, ozone layer depletion, etc.
Moreover
, these funds should be used to spread awareness among all nations and should provide some basic needs for
tackle
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the
issues
.
On the other hand
, a group of thinkers believed that mother nature should be
preventing
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as domestically as those
problems
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by people of particular nations. Specifically, some
problems
like overpopulation, pollution and waste disposal. These are the main
problems
which have to
eliminate
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with the help of the local government. These can be prevented by launching new policies. For exemplify,
the
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Indian policies
such
as two-child policies for controlling overpopulation, a
scrap
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policy for old vehicles to reduce pollution, and door-to-door garbage collecting policy for
manage
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waste disposal.
To conclude
and
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my opinion, I believe that environmental
issues
can be stopped at the individual level though.
Instead
of for waiting local or global government
for taking
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a step to put a stop to damage
of
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environment
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the environment
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people should start taking
precaution
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as their self
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. The Public need to be aware of the dangers and their consequences.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and supports the main argument.
task achievement
Address all parts of the task question, provide a clear position, and support ideas with relevant examples.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • international cooperation
  • sovereign rights
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • ocean pollution
  • collective measures
  • economic interests
  • political will
  • enforcement issues
  • free-riders
  • tailor-made solutions
  • transboundary pollution
  • resource constraints
  • global frameworks
  • national efforts
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