Some people say that e-books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The provided diagram explains the process of recycling the domestic and industrial
waste
in liquid form in a European Country. Overall it can be depicted that, the
waste
(here referred to as effluent) passes through a filter screen, a bacteria digestion
tank
, a disinfection
tank
and a sludge lagoon. As can be seen in the diagram, the effluent from the industry is
first
filtered through the filter screen which results in the suspension of few large particles from the garbage in an incinerator. The remaining
waste
then
passes through the bacteria digestion
tank
that consists of starter culture, in which
this
waste
is segregated in solid and liquid form. The bacteria-free solid
waste
then
passes to the sludge lagoon,
this
waste
is
then
dried under the heat of the Sun and excess water in it is evaporated, the dried sludge left in the lagoon is
then
used as a landfill.
On the other hand
, the bacteria-free liquid effluent passes to the disinfection
tank
in which chlorine is added
then
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at the
last
stage clean water is released in the river or seas.
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