People in major cities suffer from high levels of air pollution that causes health problems for many. Explain possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.

With the development of
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urbanization, many big
cities
are facing the serious
problem
of
air
pollution
, which is harmful to people live there. In the following passage, I will discuss the reasons that cause
air
pollution
in big
cities
and give a suggestion about how to deal with
this
situation
. The primary reason for the
situation
of
air
pollution
is the harmful gas missioned by the
vehicles
. Generally speaking, the rapid increases in their level of urbanization are
also
with an increasing number of
vehicles
. Those
vehicles
are usually those with high
emission
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emissions
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of greenhouse gases and
pollutant
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pollutants
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. Those gases not only contribute to
air
pollution
,
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but
also
is the major cause of
climate changing
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.
The
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air
pollution
would lead to asthma and lung cancer,
is
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extremely harmful to health.
For example
. Beijing is being stuck with the
problem
of PM 2.5, and the
situation
even convened to South Korea. In order to reduce
this
situation
, the
government
should introduce new policies to solve
this
problem
. From the perspective of the local
government
, the
first
and the most effective thing for the
government
to do is to reduce the number of
vehicles
in street. The most direct way is to limit the
vehicles
by
government
and make some reward system for those
vehicles
that use environmental-friendly fuels.
For example
, many
cities
in China
has
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begun the system that
Vehicles
are restricted one out of five weekdays based upon the
last
numbers of their license plates. By doing
this
, the cars on street become evidently less than before, and the
air
condition
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has been much better than before. What’s more, the governments should encourage and promote the citizens to use public transportations or eco-friendly cars. The min conclusion to be drawn is that the
air
pollution
issue is considered to be a serious
problem
that every individual will face in big
cities
.
Although
there are several causes for
air
pollution
, the most primary reason
in
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vehicles
. To alleviate the issue, the
government
should do some
restriction
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to
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the
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vehicles
.
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