People in major cities suffer from high levels of air pollution that causes health problems for many. Explain possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.

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With the development of
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urbanization, many big
cities
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are facing the serious
problem
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of
air
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pollution
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, which is harmful to people live there. In the following passage, I will discuss the reasons that cause
air
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pollution
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in big
cities
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and give a suggestion about how to deal with
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situation
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. The primary reason for the
situation
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of
air
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pollution
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is the harmful gas missioned by the
vehicles
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. Generally speaking, the rapid increases in their level of urbanization are
also
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with an increasing number of
vehicles
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. Those
vehicles
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are usually those with high
emission
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emissions
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of greenhouse gases and
pollutant
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pollutants
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. Those gases not only contribute to
air
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pollution
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,
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but
also
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is the major cause of
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.
The
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air
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pollution
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would lead to asthma and lung cancer,
is
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which is
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extremely harmful to health.
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. Beijing is being stuck with the
problem
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of PM 2.5, and the
situation
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even convened to South Korea. In order to reduce
this
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situation
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, the
government
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should introduce new policies to solve
this
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problem
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. From the perspective of the local
government
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, the
first
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and the most effective thing for the
government
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to do is to reduce the number of
vehicles
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in street. The most direct way is to limit the
vehicles
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by
government
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and make some reward system for those
vehicles
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that use environmental-friendly fuels.
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, many
cities
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in China
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begun the system that
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are restricted one out of five weekdays based upon the
last
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numbers of their license plates. By doing
this
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, the cars on street become evidently less than before, and the
air
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condition
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has been much better than before. What’s more, the governments should encourage and promote the citizens to use public transportations or eco-friendly cars. The min conclusion to be drawn is that the
air
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pollution
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issue is considered to be a serious
problem
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that every individual will face in big
cities
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.
Although
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there are several causes for
air
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pollution
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, the most primary reason
in
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vehicles
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. To alleviate the issue, the
government
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should do some
restriction
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restrictions
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to
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the
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vehicles
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.
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