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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. Give the reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#future #nobody #newspapers #books
Nowadays, Online technologies have a significant role in our daily life. Many
people
 always using online technology on mobile
phone
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phones
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 or
computer
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computers
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 to make them more
convenience
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such
 as pay
bill
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bills
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, watch tv
program
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programs
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, read online
newspaper
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newspapers
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 and
books
. Some
people
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thought
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though
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thought
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 that printed
newspaper
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newspapers
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 or
books
 are not necessary anymore since we can get
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them
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 in
online
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an online
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 format.
However
, I believed that publishing in
paper
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 still remaining.
First
 of all, Printed
books
 have important for
people
at
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 least 3 groups,
for example
, In
the
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poor countries, their
citizen
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citizens
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may be
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maybe
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 lack
of
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equipment and internet signal. Blind
people
 can not read
alphabet
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 on
tablet
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tablets
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 and
last
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 group is children, because reading on screen is not proper for their eyes.
Moreover
, Publishing
in
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books
have
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an
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 unique of it. We can keep book collections and using them for
a historical evidence
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historical evidence
a piece of historical evidence
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.
On the other hand
, some
people
 argued that online
books
such
 as
in
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Kindle or mobile
application
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applications
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 are easy to read on their equipment but
it
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they
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 might be out of battery so we can not read them
it
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this
 situation. Printed
book
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books
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 do not face
with
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this
 problem, we can read
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them
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 all the
times
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time
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. In conclusion, I believe that print
newspaper
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newspapers
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 and
book
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books
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 can be alive in the future even though online format comes to share their area.
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  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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