Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?
In recent days many
of
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students
becoming more depending
on the Replace the word
dependent
internet
. During the time
internet
is beneficial, it has many drawbacks influence and it
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its
use
for teaching aim should be reduced. I completely disagree with this
statement and I think internet
is useful in several ways not only for education
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the internet
first
place, internet
makes people and Add an article
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students
life easier, it has many benefits affects in our life and fully
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is fully
time
or for meeting new people in
social media. Change preposition
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For example
, if students
have a
free Correct article usage
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time
they can use
it for fun to playing video games or chatting with friends or watching movies. Moreover
, it teach
them how to control themselves and manage their Change the verb form
teaches
time
to make plans for studying time
and for leisure time
. If there is
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are
students
lives
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who lives
in
overseas they absolutely need to contact Change preposition
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with
their family
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On the other hand
, if internet
get
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avoid
and available in education only it might be lead to extremely disadvantages impacts in student's life. Add the particle
to avoid
Such
as,
depression, sorrow and Remove the comma
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also
bleakness they need some free time
to get some rest for more productivity. Furthermore
, pupils who live abroad need to use
internet
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faces
many difficulties in many things. Change the verb form
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For instance
, how to arrive to
the campus or anywhere by using google maps, know their utility bills, translate words if they did not know the meaning of
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internet
has many benefits and drawbacks. Add an article
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Students
need to learn how to use
it in a way that develops them and also
knowing their prioritiesSubmitted by yahyagamal2010 on
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