Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays the
relationship
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between people
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changed by
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.
Technology
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affects human routine activity and community.
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relationship
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with
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that influences
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positive communication with others.
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, the most
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may help easier life. These
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online meeting, online class, online business or marketing and long-distance
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person. People can interact with others anytime and anywhere in the world with
internet
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and devices.
Technology
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not only helps more convenient life, but it is
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expenses. The
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can
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save budget in a new normal online business and organization. Numerous people can work from their home and save huge budget to transport. Especially in
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,
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technology
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becomes the most important role
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working, education, communication and business. Recently,
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technology
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is
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one part of my body. If we don’t have any
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, we will do anything harder.
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,
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can help easier and more convenient life as well as closer and stronger
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.
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Secondly
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, the
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can control all of the processes of transportation, food and service industries.
Technology
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is leading to Reduce of human errors, easily organise and manage resources. The one card or cell phone with internet can reserve, pay, control and record consumer goods and services.
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,
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is
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to produce a large volume of production and accuracy of
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and final products. In conclusion, the
technology
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helps to get conveniently and closely relationships with better resource organization and management. Decreasing
a human errors
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and human
resource
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resources
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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