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Nowadays, pollution is increasing, there are many reasons for it. Use of plastic products and plastic bags has increased which cannot be recycled which creates pollution in the environment. What steps people and government should take to reduce it. Give reasons and examples for your answer.

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my opinion that may reduce the
pollution
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the government
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. Nowadays,
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several
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plastic
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the plastic
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item
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 cause is
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plastic
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 things take a long time to
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disappear
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 really help.
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plastic items
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plastic
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pollution
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.
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 to reduce
pollution
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government
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to
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 late to solve
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.
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trash
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trash
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a benefit
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benefit
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 for plants and some
plastic
 types able to recycle.
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,Dissection
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of
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trash
 by
colour
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the colour
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 of
bin
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the bin
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 is very easy,red for danger
trash
,green for
plastic
,yellow for normal
trash
 and blue for foods.
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result
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this
mean
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 for
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government
goverment
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 and citizens duty to destroy
a
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plastic
.
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pollution
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 only from
plastic
also
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a cars
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cars
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.Because emission from cars are
alot
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a lot
 and went to our atmosphere,To be specific in Bangkok people actually used their personal car as not
using
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 as public transportation.
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result
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this
 is
the
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another main
problems
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 for global warming.In
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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