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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

#parents #children #toys #child
Nowadays, most parents try their best to buy any kind of
toys
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toy
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 for their
children
 in order to make them happy.
Nevertheless
, endless purchases of
toys
 have not only positive
effect
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effects
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to
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kids
,
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 but
also
 some negative.
This
 essay will show which advantages and disadvantages exist when
kids
 have a large
amount
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number
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 of
toys
.
To begin
 with, there is
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an
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and
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an
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incredible
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an incredible
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 variety of goods for
children
 in our modern world. Fortunately, a multiple choice of latest
toys
 lets
children
 learn and get
a
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new knowledge while they play.
For example
,
such
toys
 as
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a bicycle
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bicycle
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bicycles
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, roller skates or scooters help
kids
 develop physically.
Then
puzzle
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puzzles
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, blocks or lego have a positive impact on
a
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 cognitive thinking of
children
.
Additionally
, there are lots of
toys
 that make
a
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 process of learning letters, numbers and things like that easier and funnier.
Moreover
,
children
 who have many
toys
 are able to share with others and make
friendship
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 through roles and games. In
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, a large number of
toys
 helps little ones use their fantasy and creativity
,
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apply
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 when they play with friends.
Although
,
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 a bid amount of
toys
 has many advantages, there are some disadvantages that families should be aware
about
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.
Firstly
, it is difficult to focus on one or two
toys
 when there are so many of them in front of a child.
Then
, perhaps it will lead to problems with concentration and attention when
children
 grow up.
Secondly
,
kids
 who get used to playing with different
toys
 every day can lose a special contact or friendship with their
favorite
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toys
 and will not have a sentimental memory in adulthood. In conclusion, in my opinion,
parent
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parents
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 are capable to make
kids
 childhood more joyful and happier thanks to
toys
.
However
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,However
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 it is more important
get
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to get
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 enough love and attention from their parents at the same time.
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