Do you think the benefits of living and working in a foreign country are more than drawbacks?
Do you consider the advantages of spending time to live and work abroad are more than disadvantages? From
this
question, I think it has positive aspects
more than negative aspects
. because you can earn more experience
from living and working, and you can not only make a lot of money
but also
can spend money
on something that you desired.
The primary reason why I think it has more benefits than drawbacks is you are able to earn more experience
. Existence and working in other countries make you have extra experience
. For example
, my sister who lived in England worked with foreigners from several countries. She told me she learned about different cultures in the workplace. Moreover
, living in this
country she was taught by her neighbours about various languages spoken which she never learned in her hometown, so, when she came back to Thailand, she has a large amount of experience
.
Another reason is money
. when you are employed and staying abroad, you can not only make a lot of money
but also
can spend money
on items that you need when you live in other countries. Based on a local university’s research, most people who work for a company overseas have a better salary than people who work in Thailand. In addition
, They can afford some objects that they really want by themselves when they live there .
In conclusion, I think the positive aspects
of living and having a job overseas are more than negative aspects
because you can get more experience
from them, and you can not only have more profit but also
can spend money
on things that you required.Submitted by ramonthapat on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite