Some people think traditional games are better than modern games in helping children develop their abilities. To what extent do you agree?
Playing
games
is part of everyone's childhood and it is said that they aid in enhancing a child's ability. Some suggest that these skills are acquired in conventional Use synonyms
games
and not in video Use synonyms
games
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This
statement holds true and it will be discussed why it has strong ground.
These long-established entertainments are not only amusing but they are Linking Words
also
beneficial to kids. When performing these activities, they need to be physically active as well as communicating between friends. Linking Words
Hence
, these sports promote both physical health and social skills. Linking Words
Furthermore
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games
indirectly reinforce their body immunities as they spend a lot of energy moving across vast space but Use synonyms
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they are in direct contact with foreign particles. Linking Words
For example
, hide and seek is a popular game in my country where it requires several participants and it demands considerable physical effort. Linking Words
Therefore
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games
play an important role in a child's development.
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games
are said to develop creativity and critical thinking, they can be rather harmful to kids. They are usually played on electronic devices Use synonyms
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as PlayStation and Nintendo which are somehow effortless to play. Linking Words
Nevertheless
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instead
of learning skills, youngsters can rather get addicted to these divertissements leading sometimes to isolation. Video gamers tend to be introverted and lack social interactions. They can Linking Words
also
express frustration and laziness. Linking Words
For instance
, in America, a large majority of young people spend at least four hours per day on video Linking Words
games
. Use synonyms
As a result
, these entertainments are rather unproductive.
In conclusion, the old Linking Words
games
outweigh completely the modern ones in terms of benefits. Use synonyms
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be beneficial to some extent.Linking Words
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