In many countries, an increase in crime has be blamed on violent images on television and in computer games. To what extend do you agree

In the

last

decade or so, we have seen an alarming rise in crimes throughout different nations. A lot of people believe that aggressive computer

games

and tv shows contribute to an increase in rates of crimes., I strongly support

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viewpoint as, it causes behavioural and psychological changes in many people, mostly youngsters. Video

games

play an important role in increasing violent behaviours. A victim of these

games

are

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usually young children, who spend their out of school time on

this

which in turn has a negative impact on their behaviour.

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a survey conducted in the Maldives in 2019, after the release of call of duty shows that there has been an increasing number of bullying and aggressive behaviour at school in the past few years..surely because they copy what they see on television which contributes to these changes.

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the new trend in television series,

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crime genre has

also

caused mental and psychological changes in adults as well. A lot of t images are shared on social media and many

folk

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are desensitised due to

this

.

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it’s reported that after the introduction of television series money heist , there has been an increased number of reported break-ins. To summarise ,

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mentioned are few examples of negative impacts on the population due to violent images and

games

.

Hence

in my opinion since many

such

programmes and

games

are made to profit the respected companies and corporations, it comes with a cost,

that is

the cost of mental health of the community.