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Many people who dropout of school are more successful than those who complete their studies. Why does this happen? What does it require to be successful?

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Nowadays,few people drop out of their education
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 early age and become highly qualified whereas the majority of students who complete their studies are less established than the others.In the following paragraph, I intend to divulge my statements and some predictions for success.
Firstly
,it is undeniable that very little amount of people have lavishing lifestyle.
This
 is because they have an interest in the carrier they chose to take after leaving the education system.
Furthermore
,young teens can work on their skills which are useful for growth in the sector.They
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 have the opportunity to try different streams and to put the use of their skillet and get the fortunate
further
 outcomes. It is irrefutable that,some situations in their life
such
 as family problems and money crisis can make them mutually very strong at that small age,
consequently
,they have the strong motive in their mind to achieve something innovative and earn money for the living.The determination to set a goal and reach that at
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 age.
On the other hand
,the most important factor to achieve success is
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hard work and focus.these provide the path for a successful lifestyle,whereas if we work hard and stay focused on the things we do we can achieve drastic changes in our carrier and life as well.
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,the head of many hotels named Oyo in India had become a wealthy person in a short
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. To conclude,it consists of many factors to be a successful person neither educated or dropout from school can achieve wonderful things if they have the determination and hardworking skills in his life.
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