Many things that used to be done by hand are now being done by machines. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
These days , using machines especially in top management decides to buy
industry
is growing and in some Add an article
the industry
cases
it replaces human intervention . Many people think that Add a comma
,cases
this
trend presents multiples advantages , other
believe that it has more disadvantages and negatives results than merits . In my opinion , I agree with the view that the drawbacks in most situations outweigh the benefits .
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Replacing
robots
can be a suitable tendacy
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tendency
tenancy
industry
for several reasons . The strongest argument is that Add an article
the industry
the
productivity and Correct article usage
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efficinece
will be increased . To put it differently , using gadgets reduces wasting of time , minimise error and improve Correct your spelling
efficiency
efficiencies
quality
and quantity of the products .Correct article usage
the quality
For example
, textile
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the textile
industry
shows a huge advancement thanks to sewing
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the sewing
a sewing
machine
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machines
grew
of capacity and productivity of companies . Change the verb
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In addition
, cost
of production will be decreased because one robot can do Correct article usage
the cost
work
of two or three workers ,Correct article usage
the work
consequently
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,
robots
rather than pay every months employee
in order to do the same tasks done by Change preposition
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machine
.
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the machine
However
, I believe that automation of human tasks engender
serious problems . Change the verb form
engenders
Firstly
, the number of unemployment will be Correct your spelling
raised
rised
dramatically due to the lack of human intervention . Correct your spelling
risen
In other words
,managers will choose the most economical solution and buy more machines rather than embauche person . That's why ,
the risk of having youth people without Remove the comma
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a job
job
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Secondly
, industry
will suffer from loss of creativity and innovation . It is obvious that the ability to introduce some new additions and Add an article
the industry
usefulness
things in the products will be more difficult with using machines . Replace the word
useful
For instance
, in my countrie
, some person essay to manufactureCorrect your spelling
country
a
traditional clothes with Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
robots
rather than do it by hand ,the final products does
not show the same value and imagination of the tailor .
In conclusion , despite Change the verb form
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diverse
merits of using Correct article usage
the diverse
robots
rather than humans . I believe that the weaknessess
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weaknesses
this
trend are
more significant than their Change the verb form
is
strenghts
because it affects directly Correct your spelling
strengths
human
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