Nowadays parents put too much of pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?
In the modern world,
parents
always want their children
to be successful with much force on them. There are some reasons to explain for
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apply
this
trend and this
development has both positive and negative.
The clear reason we can see is that the world grows dramatically and young people have to be ready in every aspect to take advantage and get success. Furthermore
, populations develop fast, in spite of increasing jobs, but works have required high levels of employees. Therefore
if children
do not get degrees or professional certificates, it will be difficult to get a good job, and parents
have to put pressure on their children
to get success in the future. Even they always ask their sons or daughters to continually learn to get high scores to have the ability to be able to apply to top schools. For example
, my parents
always ask my younger brother get
a high score in the test of the Fix the infinitive
to get
second
seminar to be accepted into the best school in my hometown.
This
force is also
good for children
because they will try their best to study. And this
may be assures
for them to be successful after they finished their study. Change the verb form
be assured
By contrast
, there are more negative points. Learning much without selecting will make young people get stress. Even if children
lost control of their minds, these young people would suicide. Many parents
chose carrer for their children
when they had been a little baby and after they got the age schooling they just have learnt following what their parents
want. And they will not have ambition with what they learn. Success not only comes from studying,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
comes from many other aspects like playing sport
, doing entertainment, building relationships. Add an article
a sport
the sport
For example
, a friend of mine was a football star, but he just finished primary school.
In conclusion, putting pressure on our children
is also
necessary in
the Change the preposition
for
morden
lives, but negative things Correct your spelling
modern
outweight
positive aspects.Correct your spelling
outweigh
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