Nowadays parents put too much of pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?

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always want their

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to be successful with much force on them. There are some reasons to explain

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development has both positive and negative. The clear reason we can see is that the world grows dramatically and young people have to be ready in every aspect to take advantage and get success.

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, populations develop fast, in spite of increasing jobs, but works have required high levels of employees.

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if

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do not get degrees or professional certificates, it will be difficult to get a good job, and

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have to put pressure on their

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to get success in the future. Even they always ask their sons or daughters to continually learn to get high scores to have the ability to be able to apply to top schools.

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always ask my younger brother

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a high score in the test of the

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seminar to be accepted into the best school in my hometown.

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because they will try their best to study. And

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for them to be successful after they finished their study.

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, there are more negative points. Learning much without selecting will make young people get stress. Even if

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lost control of their minds, these young people would suicide. Many

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chose carrer for their

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when they had been a little baby and after they got the age schooling they just have learnt following what their

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want. And they will not have ambition with what they learn. Success not only comes from studying

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comes from many other aspects like playing

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, doing entertainment, building relationships.

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, a friend of mine was a football star, but he just finished primary school. In conclusion, putting pressure on our

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lives, but negative things

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