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Some people argue that government should make laws regarding people's nutrition and food choices to improve public health while others Contend that this is the freedom of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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The issue of whether
government
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 must formulate policies with regards to what people eat in relation to nutritive value in order to promote public
health
 , or give
it's
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subjects power to choose and be responsible for what they eat is a debatable subject. It is the mandate of the
government
 to ensure that the
health
 of people in the country is up to standard.
This
 can be achieved by enacting rules and regulations on the production and supply of food
that is
 nutritious.
For instance
,it can
bann
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ban
 companies from producing, importing and supplying genetically modified food products which pose a grave danger to peoples healthy once consumed as it can lead to conditions
such
 as various forms of cancers. On the other,it is not possible for
government
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the government
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 to monitor the eating
habbits
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habits
 of the public despite measures put in place.
This
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therefore
 becomes the responsibility of the individuals to see to it that their nutritional status is taken care of. And can be done by eating a balanced diet, rich in vegetables, fruits and other nutrients to boost the immune system and
consenquently
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consequently
 help the body fight off infections and diseases. It is my belief that healthy living is a personal choice
which
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 can be maintained only if one decides to do so regardless of
health
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the health
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 education provided and
government
 policies. To sum up,
government
 and individual citizens must work together if the public
health
 status is to be uplifted.
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