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In many countries the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

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A lot of countries have to face numerous great environmental issues. So, the amount of
animals
 and
plants
 is decreasing tremendously.
This
 disaster is happening because of
globalization
.
Therefore
, as ,humans we must prevent and eradicate these harmful situations by taking some new laws and keeping moral attitudes in a good way. In
this
 essay, I would like to discuss
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causes and solutions for
this
.
To begin
 with,
globalization
effect
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affects
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 to environment badly. According to the technology growth, people try to develop their
day to day
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 life necessities by using part of the environmental resources. So, they tend to destroy forests, wetlands and other natural water systems. And
also
, they build industrial areas, highways and other development projects by destroying nature. In that scenario,
animals
 lose their habitats and hunting is the major problem
to save
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in saving
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animals
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animals'
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 lives
anymore
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apply
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.
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, according to the Harvard University
researched
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that
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75% of
animals
 and
plants
 are declining
as a result
 of
globalization
.
However
, people can eradicate
this
 problem by changing their moral attitudes and government can
take
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make
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 new laws and regulations. Sustainable development is the best concept for protecting
animals
 and
plants
 in modern society. To
illustrates
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illustrate
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 that, each and every country must
take
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get
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 permission before they start a development project from their environmental authorities. In conclusion, nowadays, in some countries
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,
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animal
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animals
 and
plants population
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plant populations
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is
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are
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 declining. So,
globalization
 is the major reason for that. But, we can save all the living begins by using our laws and changing thoughts.
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