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Some people prefer to spend their lives do you doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however think that change is always a good thing. Discuss boss this views and give your own opinion.

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In the modern world,
quite
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 large number of
people
 thinks that trying to do different things is often a good idea.
Nevertheless
, there is always a person who is used to a specific lifestyle and prefers going with a flow. In my opinion, change in any sphere of
life
 will definitely bring you fascinating experiences.
One
 of the most common problems that humans have is fear. Everybody is afraid to start something new and
that is
 totally understandable. The fear of failure and the opinion of others will follow us during all
life
.
Life
 is not that exciting without risks, as maybe
one
 try will completely change your views on it.
For instance
, imagine being happy with the surrounding you have now, but will you be the same person in 10 years time? Nobody will as
life
 is about moving ahead and catching every chance.
In contrast
,
people
 who opened themselves for new opportunities, for sure will achieve them.
Firstly
, new adventures are a breath of fresh air after which you feel rebooted.
Secondly
,
for example
,
new
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 job will help you to meet
people
 you have never seen before. It is hard to be in another collective but
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 and knowledge you acquire are irreplaceable.
Moreover
, only think that by
making
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one
 step forward, you will be closer to the dream. Risks and a good
life
 are interconnected concepts, that can not exist separately. In conclusion, everyone chooses their own path, nobody can be judged because of
this
.
One
 philosopher said “The problem is that without risking, we risk a hundred times more” and if it is true,
then
 how many
people
 lost themselves by being afraid to act.
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