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In some countries,more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Many people are becoming inquisitive about the past of
the
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of
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their
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house
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houses
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 or building in certain parts of the world. One of the reasons can be to find out whether the structure is of historic significance and
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 information could be acquired from various sources. Nowadays,
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homeowners
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home owners
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homeowners
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 want to know if their
house
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 is of historic importance so that they decide whether to associate themselves
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 or not.
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,in my
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 town there is a
house
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 which used be occupied by a traditional healer and within the confines of
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house
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 is
tree
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a tree
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 which has not been cut for years and it is
ever green
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,
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 tree is believed to hold spiritual powers that the traditional doctor used to treat his clients. Any attempts to cut it down have been unsuccessful because anyone who tried to died
misteriously
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mysteriously
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 no one wants to have anything to do with it. Data concerning the past of a building or
house
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 could be obtained in various ways including exploring the
home
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 and
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vicinity
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the vicinity
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 for
a available hints
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 as the design of the structure.
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 may indicate how old it is,
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 old
house
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 structures used to be basic with one style for a particular community for uniformity while modern ones are built in different designs according to owner preference and some have luxurious interior designs with
latest
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 fittings
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walk in
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 closets and fitted kitchen units. To sum
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 researching
about
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the origin of your
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 might help you make an informed decision on what to do
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 the
house
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 in terms of alterations or altogether disassociate yourself from the property.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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