Some people believe that governments should make the ​investment in building public libraries in every town, while others think it is a waste of money because we have access to information via the Internet. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Meanwhile many individuals have believed that governments should require to make public libraries in every rural

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have seen that it is useless due to the trend of internet use. In general, there could have a

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things to consider with

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the following are my views of point about

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topic. To commence,

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with, we could not deny the fact that on these times that there are a

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of people who still choose to read books in a quiet place.

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,

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has been a conducive place for learning ever since because of the availability of books and its

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think it is a good investment of the government to make his people knowledgeable and well informed about a

lot

of things in the most convenient and inexpensive way of learning.

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, it is convincing to every individual to read books if

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will open 24 hours and 7 days a week. While on the other side, it is true that

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rising of modern technologies nowadays and getting online, everything could be possible.

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has been indispensable since it was invented and it comes

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or wireless connection. Through

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, we could access a

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of information like recent research and discoveries, current events, newest fashion trends, weather forecast, etc. Aside from that,

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could be used in the most convenient way, anytime and anywhere you want as long you have connections. To conclude, both parts are important

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see it will never be

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investment to build libraries in every public

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we have internet

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up to every individual how they will make use

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of them for learning.