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Some people believe that governments should make the ​investment in building public libraries in every town, while others think it is a waste of money because we have access to information via the Internet. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #governments #​investment #libraries #town #waste #money #access #information #internet
Meanwhile many individuals have believed that governments should require to make public libraries in every rural
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although
 others
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 have seen that it is useless due to the trend of internet use. In general, there could have a
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 things to consider with
this
 statement
however
 the following are my views of point about
this
 topic. To commence,
to begin
 with, we could not deny the fact that on these times that there are a
lot
 of people who still choose to read books in a quiet place.
However
,
library
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 has been a conducive place for learning ever since because of the availability of books and its
ambiance
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. And
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 think it is a good investment of the government to make his people knowledgeable and well informed about a
lot
 of things in the most convenient and inexpensive way of learning.
Moreover
, it is convincing to every individual to read books if
this
 will open 24 hours and 7 days a week. While on the other side, it is true that
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 rising of modern technologies nowadays and getting online, everything could be possible.
Internet
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 has been indispensable since it was invented and it comes
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 or wireless connection. Through
this
, we could access a
lot
 of information like recent research and discoveries, current events, newest fashion trends, weather forecast, etc. Aside from that,
this
 could be used in the most convenient way, anytime and anywhere you want as long you have connections. To conclude, both parts are important
however
 as
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 see it will never be
useless
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 investment to build libraries in every public
places
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.
Although
 we have internet
it
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still
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 up to every individual how they will make use
both
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 of them for learning.
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  • access to physical resources
  • redundant
  • digital divide
  • lifelong learning
  • educational support
  • environmental impact
  • data centers
  • preservation
  • historical documents
  • intellectual freedom
  • digital infrastructure
  • diverse needs
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