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with the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books some people see this as a good step forward while others do not.what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend

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The emergence of electronic
books
 has led to the
decline
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 trend in the use of
paper based
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books
.Some individuals consider
this
 as good whereas others do not.
This
 has both merits and demerits.
Firstly
, electronic
books
 are portable meaning they are not bulky and can be carried along even in large contents.
For example
, consolidated history
books
 on a tablet.
Secondly
, the ease of access that comes with electronic learning materials because
variety
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 of sources can be researched within a short span over the internet.
Moreover
,
e-
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books
 are cheap
that is
 after accessing the materials they can be downloaded and stored for future reference
thus
 reducing the amount of money spent on purchasing the new
books
.
For instance
, soft copy notes on reading that were downloaded from the internet.
Therefore
,
e-
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books
 have increased learners ability to access a wide range of
informations
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.
On the contrary
,
paper based
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books
 have provided a solid source of reference meaning they can not be misplaced.
Furthermore
, they can be passed from
generations
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 to
generations
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.
For instance
,
presence
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 of
home
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 library that my grandparents established.
In addition
,
paper
books
does
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 not require internet connectivity making
it
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 the cheapest option
to
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 those who can not afford data bundles.
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recent research revealed that 90% of students prefer
paper
books
 as opposed to e-
books
.
Therefore
,
paper
books
 have provided
reliable
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source
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 of reference to students. To conclude, e-
books
 provide a wide range of literature which are not bulky relevant for the current trend of studying in many learning institutions.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Portability
  • Accessibility
  • Cost-effectiveness
  • Environmental conservation
  • Tactile experience
  • Aesthetic appeal
  • Digital fatigue
  • Prolonged screen time
  • Technical issues
  • Independent bookstores
  • Piracy issues
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