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process. Learning
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source of knowledge and communication skills ,which is helpful for leading wonderful life in
society
. A segment of
society
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that
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parents
should teach their
children
about how to be a good citizen in
society
, whereas others argue on
this
trend , they recommend that
children
have to learn from their
school
.
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paragraph,
thus
will lead to a logical conclusion.
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, as to why people believe that
children
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society
. The
first
and the foremost reason is that
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children
will obey the words of
parents
rather than the teachers.
parents
are the
first
teacher , which things cannot
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,while
parents
can teach easily to their
children
.
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such
as respect ,obedience and honesty.
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which play
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role in
society
in child's early stage.
for example
, many countries
parents
give knowledge to their
children
, which express
children
's character in
society
.
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,
parents
teach their kids about responsibility and moral values because education
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first
school
for juniors.
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honestly and obey
.
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,
parents
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for teaching.
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believe that
school
is the best way to learn behaviour in
society
. There are several reasons behind
this
statement.
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,
school
prepare the
children
to be a good member in
society
, because most of
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they don't have time to teach them, but
school
is that place where
children
spend maximum time,
therefore
they can learn perfectly.
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only helpful for education but
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curricular activities from, which
children
learn different things and morals.
Hence
,
school
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place to learn social values.
By the way of conclusion , both arguments carry equal strength and significance . In my
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,
parents
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children
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society
.