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Popular events like the football World Cup and other international occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotion In a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In the 21st century, while many
countries
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 are battling with one another over several issues
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 as border tension, terrorism etc., International Sports competitions like IPL, Commonwealth, Olympics have eased the tension to a greater extent between these
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. I completely agree with the notion and favour these international
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 for peace and harmony amongst all nations worldwide. The principal reason
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 holding sports worldwide is to ease the stress amongst nations. Amongst many activities, Sport plays a key role in putting aside all tensions and all the participants play like a true
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 and at the same time cheer up for their competitors.
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, in Common Wealth Games games like boxing, swimming, etc. are held in which one or the other nation win the match while the other players learn from each other's strategies and cope with the stressful situation.
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, the other major benefit from
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events
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 patriotic emotions which are released in a safe way. At times, we come across instances, where games can contribute to ending the conflicts between nations. In 2008, Turkey and Armenia teams were set to play a world cup and the Turkish president accepted. Armenia loosened visa restrictions so that Turkish fans could join the game. The match opened new diplomatic channels between the
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.
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, these
events
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 remove the feeling of nationalism
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 the moment and improve the
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 between them. To conclude, these worldwide sporting
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 been held every year to resolve the issues hovering
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 many
countries
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 and develop global unity. I am convinced with the given statement and believe these competitions should be given high priority.Though international sporting
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 can be one of the good ways to ease tensions, I believe that sports alone cannot promote peaceful international relationships.
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