In the future, nobody will buy printers newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything, they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays,
internet
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the internet

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system
become
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more
influence
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in
the
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apply

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most part of the
world
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. Some
people
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consider that
newspaper
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factories and
books
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store
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stores

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will
be disappear
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in the near future. I totally agree that online site has effecting dominant in social life
for
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forget

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get
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getting

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an information
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information
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no matter from with part of the
world
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. The reason why are as follows. There is no doubt that the
internat
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internet

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has become the main
sources
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source

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of communication in every
countries
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country

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, making
the
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modern technology is rapidly developing.
In addition
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, the development of social
nextworking
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networking

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has taken a whole
world
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get involve for the connection.
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, in the
resent
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recent

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times,
people
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from around the
world
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could get the news from
difference
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nation
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nations

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just only searching from the internet via WiFi by using
smartphone
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a smartphone

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or computer,
such
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as the news from BBC in England and CNN in
Americaand
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America
America and

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, they
also
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grow the news online platform for streaming real information through various type of online
media
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.
Therefore
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, they could consume the new immediately just only one
hours
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hour

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form
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from

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another side of the planet.
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, the printers
newspaper
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or
books
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had been popular in
last
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decade years.
However
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, in
this
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generation
people
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lacked
on
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reading
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newspaper
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newspapers

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and
books
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because the internet has become dominated
for
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social
media
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, so it is
huge
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hugely

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effective for a printers
newspaper
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and
books
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publishing.
As a result
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, there were
less
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crowed who intended to acquire information via printed
media
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.
Hence
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, gigantic publishing companies had to permanent closed.
Other
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Another

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reason, the economic community attempt to a campaign that
people
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should restrict
for
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apply

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use the
papers
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of papers

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to reduce the
globle
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global

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wroming
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worming
warming
wrong

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. In conclusion, the essay has explained why is that I
strong
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agree that printing
media
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will
disappeared
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disappear

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in the future and
people
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ability to read everything from online
media
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as it provides
people
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with the benefits of convenience and
less
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fewer

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times consumption.

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Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

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