Two maps show an Island, and changes that take place after construction of tourist facilities.

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Island

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and

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show changes that take place after the

construction

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of more tourist centres.

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it is clear that

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the

Island

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has witnessed sustainable development after the

construction

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of more tourist facilities. It is

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noticeable that the

Island

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has only a

beach

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has a tourist centre before the transformation.

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, before the

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, the

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has only a

beach

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for tourism ,which was located toward the far end of the west.

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, the

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has two seas ,which can be seen

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the Northwest and South, and

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palm

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the western and eastern parts of the

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. After the

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, the

Island

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saw substantial development.

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, the

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,

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trees

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and Northwest sea still maintained their previous location, but the

beach

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is now for swimming purposes. The accommodation was built, which surrounded the western

palm

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trees

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with a footpath from the

beach

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for easy access.

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, more houses were

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built towards the west of the eastern

palm

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trees

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, with reception and restaurant

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added, and both

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almost at the centre of the

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, with a footpath that connected them together. The previous sea at the south part of the

island

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is now used as a pier ,which allows vehicles trunk to get access to the

Island

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.