Two maps show an Island, and changes that take place after construction of tourist facilities.
The two maps provide information about an
Island
,
and Remove the comma
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also
show changes that take place after the construction
of more tourist centres.
Overall
, it is clear that
the Island
has witnessed sustainable development after the construction
of more tourist facilities. It is also
noticeable that the Island
has only a beach
has a tourist centre before the transformation.
To begin
, before the construction
, the Island
has only a beach
for tourism ,which was located toward the far end of the west. However
, the Island
has two seas ,which can be seen at
the Northwest and South, and Change preposition
in
the
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apply
palm
trees
at
the western and eastern parts of the Change preposition
in
Island
.
After the construction
, the Island
saw substantial development. However
, the beach
,palm
trees
and Northwest sea still maintained their previous location, but the beach
is now for swimming purposes. The accommodation was built, which surrounded the western palm
trees
with a footpath from the beach
for easy access. Furthermore
, more houses were also
built towards the west of the eastern palm
trees
, with reception and restaurant also
added, and both located
almost at the centre of the Add a missing verb
were located
Island
, with a footpath that connected them together. The previous sea at the south part of the island
is now used as a pier ,which allows vehicles trunk to get access to the Island
.Submitted by temitope.sabitu on
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