Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important Environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is clear that the environment has a crucial role in our life. There are different viewpoints toward finding the main issues in our environment. Some people believe that major

problems

in

this

regard are excluded

the

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extinction of some special creatures.

However

, I would agree with those who believe that other

problems

should be taken into consideration. On the one hand, modern people

keen

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to think that the most important

problems

concerning the environment are because of the disappearing

some

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animals and plants.

This

is because the ecosystem will be affected by some unique creatures.

For instance

, by

extincting

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extinction

extracting

one species like the lizard, the food chain of one special bird will be destroyed and as

result

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all the following species will be suffered from. As an illustration, some trees and plants are responsible to create oxygen on the earth and a little change can

brings

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up a catastrophic in making o2

consequently

.

On the other hand

, in my

opinion

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there are several factors that are more important than the lack of some mammals or plants. Due to the industrialization and digitization in the world, the number of industries which have produced Co2, have increased dramatically and

therefore

the amounts of Co2 emission which is the main cause of global warming have been rose

consequently

.

For example

, due to the advancement in transportation facilities, the numbers of commuting around the cities have been

growth

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sharply and

therefore

some diseases related to the pollution have

been emerged

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. In conclusion,

although

changing

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in the ecosystem has impacts on environmental issues, I believe the main reason

of

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the

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world

problems

is originated from human decisions.