More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life,but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

Nowadays, the majority of people are prone to moving and relocating
in
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urban
areas
in order to make a better living and
this
tendency is increasingly becoming prevalent.
Nevertheless
, city life has
its
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various obstacles.
However
, some of
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adverse aspects of dwelling in
cities
may be diminished by governments.
To begin
with, in recent decades, due to
a
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better education and job opportunities we can observe a huge human migration to urban
areas
.
As a result
, most of the time because of fierce competition in
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labour market they are struggling to find a better job.
Moreover
, a cost of living
such
as transportation, housing and food is very high in
a huge
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huge cities
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cities
rather than in rural
areas
.
Furthermore
, we have always witnessed air pollution in large
cities
due to the development in industry and it probably
lead
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to
the
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disastrous diseases. When it comes to solutions for
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drawbacks in urban
areas
, governments have to take some actions to measure
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negativities. So that, they may allocate some part of
budget
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to increase
a
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construction industry and provide training courses for everyone which would be affordable for poorer ones.
Thus
everyone would be able to benefit from
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advantages.
Besides
, governments should pass a law for some industries in order to reduce air pollution in
cities
. In conclusion,
nevertheless
, dwelling in the
cities
there are some obstacles, more and more people opt to settle in urban
areas
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Metropolis
  • Rapid urban growth
  • Megacity
  • Urban sprawl
  • Housing affordability
  • Infrastructure development
  • Public transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Pollution
  • Noise pollution
  • Green spaces
  • Job market
  • Social cohesion
  • Community engagement
  • Safety measures
  • Crime prevention
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