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NOWADAYS, MORE AND MORE FOREIGN STUDENTS ARE GOING TO ENGLISH – SPEAKING COUNTRIES TO LEARN THE “ INTERNATIONAL LANGUAGE – ENGLISH”. IT IS UNDOUBTEDLY TRUE THAT STUDYING ENGLISH IN AN ENGLISH SPEAKING COUNTRY IS THE BEST WAY, BUT IT IS NOT THE ONLY WAY TO LEARN IT. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THE ABOVE STATEMENT?

#students #english #countries #language #english” #country
The given diagram provides information about the internal and the external parts of a human
body
 and
also
 explains their different roles. Overall, it can be depicted that the external and internal organs of a human
body
 are ears, eyes, nose, mouth, legs and brain, lungs, heart, liver, stomach, nerves, arteries, veins respectively. As can be seen in the diagram, the brain and nerves are related to each other as the former controls the entire nervous system, the function of the heart is to pump blood around the
body
 and the role of conducting blood away and bringing it back is performed by arteries and veins respectively. The functions of the lungs are to breathe and oxygenate the blood,
similarly
, that of the liver and stomach is to store glycogen and digest protein respectively.
On the other hand
, the outer parts of the
body
 like ears, eyes, nose, and mouth perform the role of hearing, seeing, smelling, eating and speaking respectively. The entire movement of the
body
 is dependent on the legs which provides support to the
body
.
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