Today, the high sales of ppopular goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real need of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The controversial issue concerning whether the high sales of popular
goods
reflect the power of advertising or the real need of
society
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has attracted huge public attention and sparked a heated debate. Personally, I agree that the high purchase of popular
goods
reflect the influence of advertising and
that is
because in our day to day life we buy a lot of
goods
only based on the hype about that product and not because we need them. I will explain my reasons in
this
essay. One of the main causes of high marketing of popular
goods
is because of the capability of advertising and not the real need of society. Society around the world just buy
products
like shampoos, detergents, soap bars, beauty
products
eg, makeup, lipstick etc based on only the exhibit of the commodity and not because they are in actual need of them. The situation is made worse by advertising campaigns that create attractive commercials that are targeted at people of all age groups, adults, children. The results of a recent study in the US shows that around the globe the demand
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reaching extremities only because of powerful endorsement.
This
is a huge problem as buying
goods
based solely on display are beneficial for the advertising companies but malign for the financial condition of
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.
Therefore
, I have included the solution to
this
problem in
this
paragraph. One of the main ways to avoid being enticed by attractive
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is to make a monthly necessity list and buying
products
based on that .
This
is a great way of knowing what is indeed required at our homes and how much we are spending on a monthly basis on certain
products
.
Therefore
, based on the viewpoints mentioned above, I hold the firm perspective that high
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of
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mainly because of the power of advertising. That's why I
also
believe that
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should adopt the solutions mentioned in
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essay. As that would help them from getting robbed by advertisement companies.
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