Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situationsuch as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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“You can't clause your situation, the only thing you can change is how you chose to deal with it.” people say. In
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regard, there is
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idea which command to be patient in awful
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like dissatisfaction with career and lack of currency. while there is a
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idea about the rejection of happenings and doing the best. Acceptance is a good deal with problems,
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, I believe it is not the best; and struggling with issues will make all of us better persons. On the
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hand, acceptance and patience are
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of the ways of dealing with unwanted
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to say, these two manners help us to make our peace with situations.
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, a group of orthodox Muslims believe that whatever is happening to them is god's will; so that they accept their faith without questioning and with happiness. If we do not agree with our status some psychological issues will bother us.
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, we always hear about suicides for financial reasons which take place around the world.
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, struggling and conflicting is the other manner of facing disastrous
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because working hard gives us hope and it would be the
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step to success. A good example of
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assertation is Steve Jobs, the well-known entrepreneur, who did not stop trying in bad situations and
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established
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of the greatest empires in the world. If people do not try, the idea of success probability will mess them. Namely, a group of people whom I call “if only,” always do nothing and wonder if only they have done something in the past. I believe no matter what the result or the commence point is, humans should try hard. Because
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is not about getting to something or not, being something or not, it is about the path. While moving toward a goal, the sense of being beneficial is the most important thing. In conclusion, there are two arguments about human's dealing with undemanded situations, while
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says you have to stay back, the other says you have to invade to the problem. Considering all aspects of
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argument, I believe we should try and do our best to change the
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unsatisfactory situation
  • stress
  • mental health
  • content outlook
  • humble outlook
  • opportunities
  • personal growth
  • empowerment
  • control over one's destiny
  • proactive problem-solving
  • innovative solutions
  • creative thinking
  • resilience
  • stronger character
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