A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about the job in a local company that might be suitable for her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter -tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves. -say why you think the job would be suitable for her -explain how to apply for the job

Dear Emma, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

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email to inform you that there is a

job

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available for you at

this

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moment. I know that you are looking for a new

job

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in my country. Please see the information below. In my company, they are recruiting a new candidate who has

experiences

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experience

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apply

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office administration for over 3 years.

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, the most important is the candidate

need

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to have good at Thai, English, and Chinese Mandarin. As I know, the

job

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responsibilities are included in customer service, supporting

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the sale

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sale

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sales

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team,

to be

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being

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a translation, and

to take

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taking

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inbound calls.

This

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is a good opportunity for you.

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year, I remembered that you told me about your work experiences in China. It

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is related

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to the office admin. These reasons bring me

contact

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to contact

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you back. I think your personality is suitable for

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position.

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, your skills probably will help my company to have a good relationship with

the

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apply

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potential customers. So, if you are interested in

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job

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, you can go to www.wellforcess.co.th for downloading the

job

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application and apply online. Please let me know if you have any issues. Wish you all the best Mookie

jameekorn.insawang

Aug 19, 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

202 words

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