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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about the job in a local company that might be suitable for her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter -tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves. -say why you think the job would be suitable for her -explain how to apply for the job

#friend #job #country #company #-tell #sort #work #-say #-explain
Dear Emma, I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
 email to inform you that there is a
job
 available for you at
this
 moment. I know that you are looking for a new
job
 in my country. Please see the information below. In my company, they are recruiting a new candidate who has
experiences
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experience
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 in
an
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apply
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office administration for over 3 years.
In addition
, the most important is the candidate
need
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 to have good at Thai, English, and Chinese Mandarin. As I know, the
job
 responsibilities are included in customer service, supporting
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the sale
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sale
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sales
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 team,
to be
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 a translation, and
to take
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 inbound calls.
This
 is a good opportunity for you.
Last
 year, I remembered that you told me about your work experiences in China. It
related
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 to the office admin. These reasons bring me
contact
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 you back. I think your personality is suitable for
this
 position.
Also
, your skills probably will help my company to have a good relationship with
the
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apply
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potential customers. So, if you are interested in
this
job
, you can go to www.wellforcess.co.th for downloading the
job
 application and apply online. Please let me know if you have any issues. Wish you all the best Mookie
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