A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about the job in a local company that might be suitable for her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter -tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves. -say why you think the job would be suitable for her -explain how to apply for the job

#friend #job #country #company #-tell #sort #work #-say #-explain

Dear Emma, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

email to inform you that there is a

job

available for you at

this

moment. I know that you are looking for a new

job

in my country. Please see the information below. In my company, they are recruiting a new candidate who has

experiences

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experience

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apply

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office administration for over 3 years.

In addition

, the most important is the candidate

need

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needs

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to have good at Thai, English, and Chinese Mandarin. As I know, the

job

responsibilities are included in customer service, supporting

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the sale

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sale

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sales

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team,

to be

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being

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a translation, and

to take

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taking

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inbound calls.

This

is a good opportunity for you.

Last

year, I remembered that you told me about your work experiences in China. It

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is related

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to the office admin. These reasons bring me

contact

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to contact

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you back. I think your personality is suitable for

this

position.

Also

, your skills probably will help my company to have a good relationship with

the

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apply

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potential customers. So, if you are interested in

this

job

, you can go to www.wellforcess.co.th for downloading the

job

application and apply online. Please let me know if you have any issues. Wish you all the best Mookie

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