The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?

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day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on the extinction of many animal

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on land and in the

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essay will get to the underlying roots of the issue and propose some possible measures to deal with

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problem. It is undeniable that the disappearance of many land

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and marine creatures can be attributable to illegal hunting and logging as well as water contamination.

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of all, many

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on land

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as rhinos and elephants are being widely poached for their tusks, which are misunderstood as miraculous medicine for serious diseases.

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, natural habitats are being destroyed to make way for the construction of houses and factories.

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, the population of several animal

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is shrinking at an alarming rate. Regarding

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animals, owing to poor water treatment systems, a huge number of firms discharge toxic waste directly into the

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, which leads to

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. In order to alleviate

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issue, many possible solutions should be applied. The

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one is that the government should enact stricter punishments for poachers and loggers to deter them from engaging in acts that put wildlife on the verge of extinction.

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essential for the media to broadcast educational programs to raise citizens’ awareness of environmental protection and preservation for endangered

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.

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but not least, the industrial waste disposal process should be seriously scrutinized by authorities with a view to reducing water pollution and

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protecting marine life. In conclusion, the culprits causing the extinction of inland and

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creatures are varied, yet by enforcing the aforementioned actions, the government and individuals can expect to address

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environmental crisis and gain sustainable development in the long term.