Discuss the differences between the way of life in your country now and the way of life in the past

During the
last
years, Colombia has undergone many positive
changes
in different aspects that make the city much better now than in the past. In
this
essay, I will discuss some of the
changes
in my
country
now and the
way
of life in the past. In the
first
place, the advance in the technological aspect. At present, people have access to a lot of technological
infrastructure
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that helps and contributes in a positive
way
to the general development of the
country
.
For example
, communications between countries and cities are now done via the internet through different platforms
such
as
google
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, Instagram, etc. quickly and in
real time
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. Another big change in a positive
way
is the modern infrastructure developed. In the current
time
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Colombia has been growing in all the aspects relative
with
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the
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modern construction, making more access vias and generated more public entertainment places.
For instance
, now there are more places where people can go and have fun with their friends like theatres, casinos, shopping centres, etc. The
last
one
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but not the less important change is
the
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women participation in the
laboral
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labour
market. In the
past
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the women paper in the society was mostly taking care of her children and the home tasks but
actually
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women can go to the universities and can be
professional
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that
are
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prepare for
participated
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in different laboral places and they are contributing to
economy
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in the
country
. To conclude, Colombia is a better
country
now
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than
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that
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than
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the
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past. The
country
has
have
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to
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many
changes
in a very good
way
and its
changes
has
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have
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favoured the
developed
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development
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of the place in aspects as
a
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economy, infrastructure, culture and others.
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