Discuss the differences between the way of life in your country now and the way of life in the past

During the
last
years, Colombia has undergone many positive changes in different aspects that make the city much better now than in the past. In
this
essay, I will discuss some of the
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in my
country
now and the
way
of life in the past. In the
first
place, the advance in the technological aspect. At present, people have access to a lot of technological infrastructures that helps and contributes in a positive
way
to the general development of the
country
.
For example
, communications between countries and cities are now done via the internet through different platforms
such
as Google, Instagram, etc. quickly and in real-time. Another big change in a positive
way
is the modern infrastructure developed. In the current time, Colombia has been growing in all
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aspects relative to
the
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modern construction, making more access vias and generated more public entertainment places.
For instance
, now there are more places where people can go and have fun with their friends like theatres, casinos, shopping centres, etc. The
last
but not the less important change is women participation in the labour market. In the past, the women paper in the society was mostly taking care of her children and the home tasks but,
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women can go to the universities and can be professionals that
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for participating in different laboral places and they are contributing to the economy in the
country
. To conclude, Colombia is a better
country
now than in the past. The
country
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many changes in a very good
way
and its changes have favoured the development of the place in aspects as an economy, infrastructure, culture and others.
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