Some people think that drug addicts should be treated like criminals and sent to jail, while others believe that they should be treated like patients and sent to hospital. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Drug addiction in the

people

have

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been become

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serious

probem

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problem

problems

in the whole world. Youngsters, even

teen agers

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teenagers

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engulfed in illegal

drugs

. Some

people

give

opinion

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an opinion

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that drug

addictors

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addiction

addictions

addicts

should be seen as

symphy

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sympathy

simply

and to be treated in the hospital and others advocate for legal

penality

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. I shall discuss both views and give my opinion in the

last

.

Firstly

, It is

neccessary

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necessary

to understand the root cause of drug addiction in

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societies? I understand

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unemployment is a reason among the other problems. After getting

education

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, when youngsters do not find the right job, they get

mently

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mentally

stressful

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and

start

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consume

the

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drugs

.

Initially

, they start to get relive from the tension and soon they get

habtial

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habitual

of

this

dangerous intoxicate.

Circumstance

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mislead the path of youth

hence

they should be treated with mercy and motivate them to come out from

this

addiction circle. Habitual of

drugs

is mental sickness,

hospital

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the hospital

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is the right place to treat and motivate them to live one's normal life.

Secondly

, some are those

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consume the

drugs

for enjoyment. They

encourge

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encourage

other

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others

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too to consume the

drugs

. Illegal

drugs

are expensive affairs, to

fulfill

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their

requirment

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requirement

requirements

, youngsters start

commit

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crimes.

For example

, when they do not have money to buy the

drugs

, they start stealing,

snaching

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snatching

some time commit murders too. Now these days, it can

been

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seen that crime rates

is

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increasing in

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police records. In the

consistitution

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constitution

, punishment for crime is to send the criminal behind the bar only. In the conclusion, I trust that

people

should be

enganged

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engaged

with their earning for survival with

honor

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. Government should be

emphsis

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emphasis

to prepare the right policies so that

people

can be get employed according to their

ablility

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ability

.

Younsters

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Youngsters

should

be get

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motivate

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and

spead

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spread

awareness against the

drugs

. Miscreant

people

, who encourage

people

to consume

the

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drugs

, should be

indentified

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identified

and penalise under

consisitution

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constitution

.