Outline why you have selected your chosen three university courses, and explain how this relates to your previous academic or professional experience and your plans for the future.

Aleksanr Solzhenitsin, my personal favorite, once said that ‘intolerance is the
first
sign of an inadequate
education
. An ill-educated person behaves with arrogant impatience, whereas truly profound
education
breeds humility.’ As a true leader of a diktatura, Solzhenitsin’s words are breeding my motto and is continuing to drive me against intolerance and to inspire me toward
education
. Amid my exceptional career, applying for a Master’s degree with the Chevening opportunity is my cognizant path for the
next
two years. I am eager to gain
knowledge
, and absorb the international expertise, and initiate and implement the UK effective and long-lasting law reforms. To fully comprehend the ideas and the morale, and to
further
imitate the tools and instruments, the UK
education
system is my definite top choice. It is my honor to apply for the Chevening scholarship, and to join the prospective student body, and to challenge myself with
knowledge
and expertise. Throughout my leadership career, I consistently challenged myself with the question: what is the future of the post-Soviet Union republic, Kazakhstan? Since it newly gained independence, it was as a freshly born eagle, unclear with the wind’s direction but determined to fly, there are still many challenges to tackle and systems to strengthen. As I was integrating and implementing a 2017 reform that protects the Kazakhstan’s citizens against police, I fully comprehended my capability and desire to continue implementing reforms for the benefit of the people. The people’s safety, rights and protection are an equation for a sound and prosperous state. For
this
reason, I have chosen the leading and academically challenging universities in the UK: the LLM programme in the
University
of Birmingham,
University
of York and Reading
University
. These institutions have impeccable international reputation, produces top notch experts, provides excellent professorship, and surrounds with the bright student community. As I researched the offered program’s courses, I automatically pictured myself attending XXX courses at Oxford, The Use of Military Force at Reading
University
, and XX course at
University
of York. It would be a dream come true to attend these classes, to develop a comradery with the fellow students, and to gain theoretical and professional
knowledge
from the renowned professors. Each of these programmes are exceptional, but the programme at XX is my top choice. Situated in the heart of UK’s cultural and international gem, is attracting me with its excellent research focus on transforming communities locally and globally. And I am eager to strengthen my
education
and gain
knowledge
of establishing reforms upon my return to Kazakhstan.
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