You recently went to the concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer . In your letter Say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

Dear Alan, I am writing

regard

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to your performance at the concert

took

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place recently. I would like to let you know

of

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how much I admire your singing on regular basis

besides

on the concert day too.

To begin

with, you have rocked the performance on the concert day. I have thoroughly enjoyed your vocals and

completely

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immersed

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the emotion of

tthe

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the

song.

Although

, there was another singer alongside

of

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yours you were dominative with the overall performance. I was grooving to the

music

with your perfect sync of singing with the beats of your team.

Furthermore

,

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would like to tell you about my interest in the

music

field. Though,

i

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am not as popular as you I have great experience in

music

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field as a lead

guitarist

. I have been

into

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this

profession

since

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5 years and have worked at different restaurants and

night clubs

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for different bands as an on and off member. I was mostly considered as an alternative option

inspite

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in spite

of being a good

guitarist

.

Also

,

i

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love playing electrical guitar because of its raging sound and quirky notion adding to the

music

.

Therefore

, I would like to request you to help me in being a better singer and

guitarist

. I want you to consider me as a visitor at your practice sessions so that

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can learn and improve myself

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being a good

guitarist

and a singer. In conclusion, please consider my request and do the needful. Hoping for a

postive

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positive

response from your end. Yours sincerely Rohit