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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you have done since the course suggest another course you would like the school to offer

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Dear sir, I am writing regarding the
cookery
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course
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 which had been recently conducted in the
cookery
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 school.
To begin
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 with, I am Rohit one of the
enrolllers
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enrollees
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 in the
cookery
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course
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 held at
th
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the
ecampus
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campus
. I would like to share my review
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 the
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 conducted. The
course
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 was
knowledgeble
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knowledgeable
 and
skillful
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. I had
lot
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 to learn from the
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besides
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 was able to meet legendary chefs who have come to judge our cooking skills on the final day of the
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.
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, the
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 was really well organised and
cost effective
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 taking the burden of budget
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constraints
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 which could have been a reason to avoid joining the
course
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.
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,
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 has improved my
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vision
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vison
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 towards cooking techniques and
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style
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 of my cooking has been completely changed. Now, I cook for
large
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a large
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 number of people
seemlessly
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seamlessly
 without any proportions errors in the dishes being prepared. Recently, after the completion of the
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course
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 I have almost cooked different cuisines. For eg
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 Continental, American, Thai, Chinese, Indian and
arabian
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. All these cuisines were learnt during the
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 and have received
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 of compliments from my family and friends. In conclusion, I would like to request for conducting
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another
cookery
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course
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 which teaches us
further
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 on different recipes missed during the previous
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. Yours sincerely, Rohit
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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