The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, alld the marital status of adult Americalls in two of the years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisolls where relevant.

The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between

1970 and 2000, alld the marital status of adult Americalls in two of the years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisolls where relevant.
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first chart illustrates the change in the number of marriages and divorces in the US over a 30-year period from 1970. The
second
chart compares the proportion of American
adults’
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marital statuses in two years, 1970 and 2000.
Overall
, there was a clear downward trend of
people
getting married in the US.
Although
a majority of adult Americans were married in both recorded years, there was a quite higher percentage of
people
staying single in 2000. From 1970 to 1980, 2.5
million
marriages were registered in America;
however
,
this
number gradually decreased to 2
million
by the year 2000.
In contrast
, the number of divorces filed was around 1
million
in 1970 and
then
reached a peak at almost 1.5
million
a decade later. There had been since
then
fewer divorces and the figure fell back to 1
million
in 2000, exactly 50% of that of the marriages in the same year. The percentage of married American adults dropped from 70% in 1970 to around 60% in 2000.
Similarly
, there was a marginal decrease in the proportion of widowed
people
. The figures for never-married
people
and divorced ones experienced a slight rise, by around 8% for each category.
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