Some people think that the government should give money to creative people such as artists and musicians. To what extent extend do you agree.

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The thought that government should provide funds to innovative and creative individuals like
creator
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,
designer
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and
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,
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. I completely agree with
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statement as well as all reasonable
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will be elaborated
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the upcoming paragraphs.
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with, unfurling some valuable reasons why money
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on artists and musicians.
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and foremost, talents are God gifted and
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only
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nourish
it
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by physical and financial help. To explain, talented
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are unique because they do something different from
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. To achieve
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next
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of creativeness they need money.
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, Pottery is
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one the special
art
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and to develop
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art
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pot
artist
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artists
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need foundation from government authorities.
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, all
arts
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form
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forms
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are related to culture and religious things. So, to encourage
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of
people
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is automatically protect the roots.
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, in Jammu and
Kashmir
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many local
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make handcrafted goods
which
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show
their
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originality of their background.
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, there
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some
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which
also
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clearfy
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clarify
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that government should take some steps. Primarily, music
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no boundaries and
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have no language barrier, everyone easily
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with it. To invest
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musicians and singers
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a bad idea for any nation. These
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of investments are not only helpful for artists but
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pride for
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the country
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. To exemplify, K pop is the
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sound
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music style of Korean
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and
famous
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worldwide
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world wide
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,
people
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follow their
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and make videos on social sites and with
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most
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people
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want to
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visit
Korea. To encapsulate, I believe that
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play
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an indispensable role in our life as well as cover original values of any country and develop the nation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stimulate the economy
  • investing in the creative industry
  • job opportunities
  • economic growth
  • cultural enrichment
  • public exhibits
  • international recognition
  • further investment
  • preserve cultural heritage
  • creative individuals
  • financial support
  • artistic movements
  • social cohesion
  • community participation
  • social bonds
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